Simply You

[~live2tell~]

Would appreciate any feedback from you guys, thank you.


Simply You

Your eyes... brighter than the stars of heaven, speaking softness and love to me.

Your tears... full of compassion, sweeter than dewdrops at the break of dawn.

Your lips... more delicious than a bed of red roses, you smile and my soul melts.

Your kisses... sweeter than a pot of honey, addictive as nicotine I want more.

Simplicity and truth dwell inside of you

 

[Jurhum]

pretty nice. Very nice, rather. Me liked a lot.

 

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pretty nice. Very nice, rather. Me liked a lot.

Thanks I'm pleased you like it, ta for taking the time to read and post your comments - appreciated.

 

[k69atie]

i really liked this, simple but beautiful. well done sara

 

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i really liked this, simple but beautiful. well done sara

Thanks Katie, simple was my aim, glad you liked

 

[k69atie]

yeah this is one of my favs of yours, keep it up :thumb:

 

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yeah this is one of my favs of yours, keep it up :thumb:

Ta girl, I'll try

 

[Cown]

Nice and sweet poem Sara, it differs from anything else I've read from you before, I like it :thumb:

 

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Nice and sweet poem Sara, it differs from anything else I've read from you before, I like it :thumb:

Thx Cown, glad you liked it and found it different - wb btw

 

[Dante]

i enjoyed it, because i feel the same way about him.
have you guys set a date? marvelouz said you're engaged.

 

[MarvelouZ]

^^^stop stalking 221 and me, you said in the other thread a member shouldnt be allowed to post messages for banned members, so you shouldnt talk about banned members either, P.S. did you catch the people that sent death threats to your family?

 

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Don't worry bout it Marv

 

[Soldier like me]

Congrats sara

 

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Congrats sara

Thanks, btw I lost your email address sorry

How come I'm not on your shoutie list....

 

[Soldier like me]

Well come to msn ..

Shoutie list was untouched for months but I edited it now

 

[~live2tell~]

Well come to msn ..

Shoutie list was untouched for months but I edited it now

I was on yesterday and you didn't even say hello... how rude

Your shoutie list looks better now :thumb:

Anyways thx for readin my poem, appreciate it, ta

 

[TG1 Ghetto One]

yeah nice poem i was feelin it well done

 

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thanks for checking it over and taking the time to post your comments - appreciated.

 

[Ivory$horty]

That was really sweet. So uniquely written. I love how you spoke so much within such few lines. I could feel the love you wrote this with
Great job!


3 hugz,2 kisses,1 love
~*Ivory$horty*~

 

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Thx shorty, as always I appreciate your feedback, pleased you checked this out and took time to post your comments, thank you!