xxsaraxx said:
Just a lil something I wrote for Zaf last night 
Would appreciate any feedback from you guys, thank you.
Simply You
Your eyes... brighter than the stars of heaven, speaking softness and love to me.
Your tears... full of compassion, sweeter than dewdrops at the break of dawn.
Your lips... more delicious than a bed of red roses, you smile and my soul melts.
Your kisses... sweeter than a pot of honey, addictive as nicotine I want more.
Simplicity and truth dwell inside of you
Would appreciate any feedback from you guys, thank you.
Simply You
Your eyes... brighter than the stars of heaven, speaking softness and love to me.
Your tears... full of compassion, sweeter than dewdrops at the break of dawn.
Your lips... more delicious than a bed of red roses, you smile and my soul melts.
Your kisses... sweeter than a pot of honey, addictive as nicotine I want more.
Simplicity and truth dwell inside of you
nice stuff Sara, i haven't been around lately, and haven't seen much of your writing either but it's good to see you still here.
Keep it up. :thumb:
