some wordplay and multi fun

[down n' dirty]

havent dropped in prolly a year..just a lil somethin off the top of the dome



i think my days are numbered/
im not gonna be murdered,but struck down by thunder/(ouch)
oops,i meant lightning,the thoughts in my head frighten me/
like i got monsters and vampires chasing and biting me/(boo)
i smoke weed and take pills till there gone/
my internet rhymes go "thru the wire" like kanye's first song/
i got rhymes so raw you hear them and get salmonella/
im a verbal killer,got all the mc's pissed offat me cuz i ate the alphabet for dinner/(yum)
in battlin im a winner, only once to be defeated/
in life im a sinner and not one will be deleted/
my money stacks depleted alot since i stopped pedlling drugs/
now i have to buy my potand quit meddling w/ the thugz/
soon as i enter a room bicthez come w/ kisses and hugs/
i tell her she can come as close as she wants as long misses the lugz/(stay off my feet bitch)
"if you scratch my boots im liable to shoot and nobody wants that dear"
"how bout climb thru my legs and suck my dick from the rear"



just a lil somethin sstupid..

 

[Roaddogz]

"how bout climb thru my legs and suck my dick from the rear"

hahaha

 

[Strictly 4]

lmao that was fire... i liked the ending alot.. do u record?

 

[2pac4prez2004]

i smoke weed and take pills till there gone/
my internet rhymes go "thru the wire" like kanye's first song/

thats the shit dude....i say fucked up shit like this

 

[down n' dirty]

thanx
fo the feedback

 

[ImmortalTech]

hhaa last bar kills it
nice drop, keep droppin
~peace

 

[Advocate]

lol last line does kill it

 

[Jurhum]

havent dropped in prolly a year..just a lil somethin off the top of the dome



i think my days are numbered/
im not gonna be murdered,but struck down by thunder/(ouch)
oops,i meant lightning,the thoughts in my head frighten me/
like i got monsters and vampires chasing and biting me/(boo)
i smoke weed and take pills till there gone/
my internet rhymes go "thru the wire" like kanye's first song/
i got rhymes so raw you hear them and get salmonella/
im a verbal killer,got all the mc's pissed offat me cuz i ate the alphabet for dinner/(yum)
in battlin im a winner, only once to be defeated/
in life im a sinner and not one will be deleted/
my money stacks depleted alot since i stopped pedlling drugs/
now i have to buy my potand quit meddling w/ the thugz/
soon as i enter a room bicthez come w/ kisses and hugs/
i tell her she can come as close as she wants as long misses the lugz/(stay off my feet bitch)
"if you scratch my boots im liable to shoot and nobody wants that dear"
"how bout climb thru my legs and suck my dick from the rear"



just a lil somethin sstupid..

Nice, actually was good. I liked this part, "im a verbal killer,got all the mc's pissed offat me cuz i ate the alphabet for dinner" :thumb:

 

[TG1 Ghetto One]

that was tight