Somehting I made up with 2Pac/Outlaw lyrics in mind..

Rahim

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#1
MARKED 4 DEATH


In the ghetto there's no sympothy for those who are broke
At night I watch the gun smoke and foes toke,
I'm wanting more, aND im all alone
so what am i to do but be a mannn
do the best i can
rely on my self, thats the simple plan
run the game like a crack fiend
hang with G's, OG's and collect Ki's
My reply, Until they kill me, when they ask me
But Never falling into line with death (EVEN IF THEY BLAST ME)
WILL I BE BLESSED???
running from the cops, until my arest
My last breath
Under age, and living in poverty (god bless my family)
High Speed, engaging in robberies
my criminal mind pre occupied my time with getting richer
fuck my jelous homies and my bitch, even if i have to ditch her,
i wont miss her

im coming to grip with the meaning of life and on my last breath..
living wreckless and restless
But if your quik you can catch me with that thug life tatted on my chest

IM MARKED FOR DEATH


In my life i live eternal
I stay alert when my foes pass me by
I'd rather walk on the dirt, but they never see me cry
Put the alive theories to rest and bury me with a vest
Put a clip in my pocket and place a grenade at the front yard
DID U THINK ID DIE??
**EXPLOSION LIKE IN THE END OF BOMB FIRST*****

BOOOM when i entered the room
my enemies are now buried
no longer living
dead at the street sign
cause he got caught up in bad boy living
STAY UP
waiting for the day they try and dig me up 6 feeet in the dirt

DID U STILL THINK ID DIE??
REAL N*GGAZ DONT DIE
I DIDNT LIE



kadafi



while clutching fo 5 glocks
i got my shotty locked
tucked in my tummy for those who want to play dummy
Im down to brawl
i stay the king pin
collecting dough , moving fast or slow


waiting to proceed
collecting G's

pac what can we do with our enemies?? (KIll em all)

until we die, living under the sky

making hits and switching lanes
ducking from cops
but never knowing when this will all stop
becuase im marked for death.


hussein



WHEN WILL IT BEGIn?

im holding my 44 wondering when will they let us n**az in

working like a lunatic, better yet, im through with it


we dont fall, we stay tall, through it all

my home boys dont squable, we live to brawl

i stay close to yak as he passed me the glock

busting rounds, agravating a riot, causing a fire


never loook at me twice without smiling

ill leave you shot before you pull out your phone and start dialing


911


marked for death
 
#4
Those lyrics were crazy! I was feelin it man, i couldnt believe as i read it i could picture pac sayin the words. Nice drop bro. Nice to see some1 post on this form again, damn this place has been dead.
 
#5
You gotta be fuckin kiddin me.

*Riaz* said:
Yo Homie I Felt Those Lyrics man....
Mind If I Spit Those Lyrics On A Beat?
You gotta be fuckin kiddin me.
struggle01 said:
Those lyrics were crazy! I was feelin it man, i couldnt believe as i read it i could picture pac sayin the words. Nice drop bro. Nice to see some1 post on this form again, damn this place has been dead.
You gotta be fuckin kiddin me.

You might as well just take words Pac said, put them in a hat, draw a hundred of them, and arrange them into a verse. You even made a Fatal and Kadafi verse! What the hell are you trying to do? Make people think there's an actual Pac song called Marked 4 Death?

This section is for people to show others their own written lyrics, not for people who are obsessed with 2Pac to write lyrics they think sound like something Pac would've said and imagine him rapping them.
 

Dante

Meyer & Dante Best Friends4eva
#6
"hang with G's, OG's and collect Ki's"
you clearly don't even understand what pac was saying in his lyrics.
i pose this question to you - what is a "ki" and why would pac collect them?
 

S O F I

Administrator
Staff member
#7
Rahim, google it fast so everybody can think you know it.

Hint: It's not an object used to open door locks.
 
#9
The song was far from original but the dude said he made it up based off Pac and Outlawz lyrics. That being said i thought it was tight. It matches up nice with the style of a typical pac and lawz song. Thought it was cool the way kadafi and fatal got thrown in with it 2. Kamikazi u right the place is more for original work but long as Rahim isnt tryin 2 make all his flows sound like pacs who cares. He just havin fun with the idea and the man did a decent job.
 

*Riaz*

New Member
#10
struggle01 said:
The song was far from original but the dude said he made it up based off Pac and Outlawz lyrics. That being said i thought it was tight. It matches up nice with the style of a typical pac and lawz song. Thought it was cool the way kadafi and fatal got thrown in with it 2. Kamikazi u right the place is more for original work but long as Rahim isnt tryin 2 make all his flows sound like pacs who cares. He just havin fun with the idea and the man did a decent job.
totally agree with you on that homie!
 
#11
damn, i remember droppin a peice like this when i was 14... I dont mean to diss u or nothing, but shit u gotta be more orginal than that. most of those lines i'm pretty sure i've heard in Pac tacks, so obviously if u spit it with pac and the outlawz in mind, alotta what u say may be a lil more than just influenced by them... keeppracticing though.

~peace
 

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