Stop Time..

[DaRoYaLbRaT]

Stop Time


Stop time 4 a second, leme stand there with you
There's a few things, we should sort thru
No friends, No phones - No-one 2 get in the way
No-one 2 inter-fear with what I have 2 say...

I'm not tryna b rude, or sound obsessive
I dont wanna seem sarcastic, or come across aggressive,
I just wanna explain what u do 2 my brain
If only u knew, just how insane,
U make me feel - & how I feel when ur gone
Do u kno what I'd give, just 2 belong,
2 u - I know what they all say
They say ur difficult each & everyday,
But it's nothing I dont kno - & it doesn't bother me
I understand you - seriously,
We think alike - If only you knew
If u actually noticed what we go thru,
Were always proving 2 each other... But y?
R u tryna prove that u can make me cry?
Do u need 2 c it? will it make u feel better?
Would u smile if u knew it was so writing this letter?
Coz I dont think I've met someone with ur persona
You make me hate cha & still wana get 2 kno ya,

If u think ur too good 4 love, u'll be lonely 4ever
& if u dont wanna be lonely, why cant we be 2gether?
U cant be as scared as I am - & thats a fact
I'm terrified that u'll stab me straight in the back,
I'm scared that you'll cheat & I'm scared that you'll use
But I'm more concerned that you'll leave me confused,
Only coz its happened so many times b4
when I give my all - But they only want more,
I dont think u kno, just how burnt I am
But I'd give anything 4 u 2 understand,
Your the 1 I would stop hurting 4
There's something about u I cant help but adore,
U leave me unsure - but b4 I walk
I wanna be mature enough 2 just talk.

I'm not saying I can garentee that we'll stay 2getha
But if the oppurtunity was there I'd work on it 4ever,
I kno I'm not perfect, but I never claimed 2 b
I just want u 2 have a lil faith in me,
If we gave it a chance... why cant we give it a go?
I'm not ashamed of how I feel nor 2 let it sho,
I dont think there's nothing wrong with that - 4 some reason u do
U make me feel bad 4 caring bout u
Leaving me 2 chase circles round my mind
I wish that I, Could just stop time....


Stop time 4 a second - Leme stand there with you
There's a few things we should sort thru,
No friends, No phones - No-one 2 get in the way
No-one 2 inter-fear with what I have 2 say....

 

[Jurhum]

this is a wonderful piece.. shame no one replied to it yet.. shame that this section is dead now..

i've read from you before and all your work is wonderful. keep it up. don't let this section get you down. i know how it feel when i dont get a reply to my thread or shit like that.. but trust me.. u already know that you have talent.. just keep it up.

 

[DaRoYaLbRaT]

^Hey Jurhum, thanks 4 takin the time 2 peep this & reply. Ur words Are greatly appreciated..

I feel ya .. It is a shame this section died - Even worse if u remember how much traffic it use 2 have... I wont stop writing coz this page is a lil slo, just try & mayb post more with hope others might do tha same, & things might pik up a bit.. Wishful thinking maybe ... lol But none the less, thanks again 4 checkin this out!

peace

 

[Jurhum]

Yeh i remember when this section, formarly known as PJ, used to be packed.. ivoryshorty, thug poet.. and many other people used to drop some mad pieces.. there is a few i can't remember right now.. but this place was fully packed with great poets.. but i guess for everything good there is an end.. eh

 

[Stred]

great lyrics bro.. i enjoyed reading it.. :thumb:

 

[Jocka]

i actually could've swore i replied to this.. wow i dunno whats going on with my replies not getting through.

Anyway, i really liked this girl. It flowed nice off the tongue. The emotion is handed to me to deal with and thats how a poem should be. Beautiful writing on a confusing subject.

 

[The.Menace]

I was just too damn busy the last weeks that's why it took me so long. This is a nice piece brat, you know I love your rhymin and how you structure your poems cause it's kinda like I love to approach my poetry. The topic, yeah, it's about relationship and love or whatever, but you just kept it street enough for me to like it. You know how it is, romance wasn't made for me hehe.

 

[DaRoYaLbRaT]

Jurhum - yep, I guess it is tru... Thanks 4 peepin'

Stred - Thanks 4 checkin this Out & replyin - Glad you enjoyed it!

Jocka - Hey Josh! Thanks 4 the reply - confusing just wouldn't be the right word lol.. Means Alot that u peeped it, It always has & U knooo disss . On tha real, Much Appreciated babiiboi!

Menace - hay waddup Tommy! Been a while homez! I'm glad you was feelin ma work - Yeah I kno dat this aint your sort of topic, lol - It aint "usually" mine either...... But I'm glad I could hold ya on this one! I always appreciate you takin tha time to peep my ish! Thanks T!

peace

 

[II-ATLAS-I]

one of the better pieces ive read here.
great work