Symmetry

[-Daniel-]

Here's the quickest poem you will ever read guranteed. It's about other people's assumptions and me just watching them making the same mistake over and over.

Symmetry

Two quick to decide.

One takes one's time.

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2 quick 2 decide

1 takes 1's time

 

[Sebastian]

wtf?...

 

[-Daniel-]

It's Poetry. A play on words in other words. It's about other people making assumptions while I just watch them falter and jump to conclusions.

 

[~live2tell~]

Yeah call me dumb but I don't get it...

 

[221]

Maybe hes saying its best to be patient

 

[-Daniel-]

'One' in Old English means oneself.

 

[The.Menace]

I know but still this a lil short you know. Without you explainen what it should be about I'd have no chance to get it.... but still. love yourself and your expression, you can't go wrong. - KRSONE

 

[shattered dreams]

it kind of seems like he is A) trying to be deeper than he is B) making a joke of poetry in general C) didnt explain himself at all.

 

[-Daniel-]

It's Abstract Poetry. I draw abstract pictures and I write abstract poetry.

Do you expect everybody to follow strict guidelines regarding forms of poetry?

I make my own forms. It's called being creative. Lesson 1 of the day.

Symmetry is with regards to the form of the poem, not what it's about. Did you jump to conclusions that the title was about the poems subject? THATS EXACTLY WHAT THE POEM IS ABOUT! You are judging the poem, Making assumptions, jumping to conclusions, quick to decide. Get it now?

You are '2' I am '1'...'2' is separate from me and 2 makes assumptions. YES the poems message is do not make assumptions; be patient in making a choice.

 

[221]

be patient in making a choice.

I said that in an earlier reply, I understood it, do I win a prize?

 

[-Daniel-]

I did have a trophy for you but i can't upload pictures somehow. so how about a smily face . They used to be called 'Merits' when I was at school.

 

[221]

Yes, I use to have "merits" when I collected 24 merits I got a pen with my schools name on it and then when I collected 48 merits in my lil journel I could go up on stage in assembly and collect my free school Mug (cup)

So what prizes do I get with collecting your merits? A lil cock?

 

[~live2tell~]

Yes, I use to have "merits" when I collected 24 merits I got a pen with my schools name on it and then when I collected 48 merits in my lil journel I could go up on stage in assembly and collect my free school Mug (cup)

So what prizes do I get with collecting your merits? A lil cock?

lol, we got commendations and a certificate when we got 50. I never got a certificate though

 

[-Daniel-]

My poem too complicated for people to comment on?

 

[~live2tell~]

My poem too complicated for people to comment on?

I actually understand it better now that you and zaf explained it.
Very thought provoking and different style. Its good, would like to see more from you.

 

[Belo]

Good 2 see you trying something different man...
Keep it up
Peace
Belo

 

[-Daniel-]

So what prizes do I get with collecting your merits? A lil cock?

What is that a lewd comment? doesn't matter, you banned.

 

[XXXShepherd]

^ Disgusting. Great poem! I liked the ambiguity of it. Two/too. You a genius.