Tash The Drug

[kman_69]

havn't checked in here for fuckin ages...and it looks like nobody will read this...but thought id post it up for old times sake

Tash The Drug -02 September 2005
leme tell you bout this girl, damn shes so beautiful
-its true man, she makes me feel the way i used to do
..its a simple view, but um.. she makes me laugh
like rollin' round on the grass on acid tabs and grass
-n' its not hard to grasp, coz shes like a supplier
not sellin’ me drugs, but still getting me high, and..
-im not lying.. when i say im kind of addicted
but this time its different, like mixing it in..
-with prescriptions, man, its gettin' ridiculous
coz im fiendin' for her like some pills n' cigarettes
wishin' she was in my system; yes!.. its about time!
-she's pickin' me up and keepin' me up like doing lines
and shes so fine...like my own 'Brooklyn Masala'
wait a minute.. oh look.. heres comes Natasha!........Ahihi

 

[MX Red]

That was awsome, really liked that. That makes me want to fall in love. I like all the drug references...u must like this chic!

-MX

 

[Mr Marz]

ill write one that will make u never wanna fall in love
but ya i like this 1 a lot

 

[Kadafi Son]

Oh word? I need to be taking your prescriptions.

Nice poem, it was sloppy, but very poetic at the same. If you can do that, that's talent.

 

[kman_69]

hey thanks for the feedback guys...glad u feelin it!

MX: yeah shes a pretty cool chick

mrmakaveli: post it up man...i bet ive got a peice that will make you not want to fall in love even more hehe

kadafi: yeah my style is a bit sloppy...but i just find it easier to read the way i write things... thanks

 

[~live2tell~]

Its certainly different, good desciptive vocab and nice flow.

 

[The.Menace]

Really really nice piece. The end sounds a lil bit forced, the rest is poetry at its finest.

 

[kman_69]

^^thanks guys....yeah end prob seems a bit forced coz it was actually the first line i wrote -sometimes i write shit backwards hehe

 

[Jurhum]

haven't been here for a while.. but this is something worth replying to...always nice poetry you've presented.

 

[True Thugz]

It's more like a verse for a rap song because of the way it's structured (get it copyrighted ) I like it.

Keep it up.

 

[kman_69]

jurhum, thanks heaps man...that means a lot

truethugz, glad u feelin this one too man...i would get it copyrighted, but doesnt that cost money?

peace

 

[KiRsTyBoO]

wow, that was mad description
i liked it, i like your style.

xXxXx

 

[kman_69]

^^thanks Kirsty ....glad u feelin it!

 

[jm5471]

with prescriptions, man, its gettin' ridiculous
coz im fiendin' for her like some pills n' cigarettes

that was my fav line in this

i enjoyed the way that you put this piece together, good rhyming and i like the metaphors

 

[kman_69]

ah thanks man! actually that was my fav line as well

thanks for the feedback!

peace!