The 1 Millionth Man March

[kman_69]

The 1 Millionth Man March -5th December 2005

the 1 millionth man march was hosted by me
-1 man standing with 1 million empty seats
..speaking to no-one, as if i was alone, and..
-i didnt know what was supposed to be going on
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oh no, now the spot lights shifting positions
-its seems no one was really interested in my lyrics
ah shit, wats the difference? they were never really there!
..which seems unfair.. but i guess in the end man, i didnt really care.

 

[kman_69]

hhhmmm i guess this peice was a little too abstract for you guys huh?

 

[Cown]

If I am understanding this right you are expressing that you want to share your written feelings, even though you dont have anyone to share it with...

I must say this is definatly something special, I cant really compare this to anything else cause I've never seen anything like this before hehe, very interesting though

 

[True Thugz]

Hey I liked that man.
It was powerful it it's own way. The set up of it seemed like it was a lot longer than it was. Nicely done :thumb:
I enjoyed it.

 

[kman_69]

If I am understanding this right you are expressing that you want to share your written feelings, even though you dont have anyone to share it with...

I must say this is definatly something special, I cant really compare this to anything else cause I've never seen anything like this before hehe, very interesting though

thanks for peepin cown! yeah u kinda got it.....but sorta back to front umm its essentially saying that i write to express myself... and the ending is kind of the realisation that i dont care if there is an audience or not...

basically its sort of a perspective on people who write to impress other people, and not to expess or even impress themselves with their writing...

thanks for peepin again!

 

[kman_69]

Hey I liked that man.
It was powerful it it's own way. The set up of it seemed like it was a lot longer than it was. Nicely done :thumb:
I enjoyed it.

thanks man, hehe...yeah its a bit deceiving...seems longer than it is

glad u feelin it!

peace

 

[The.Menace]

hhhmmm i guess this peice was a little too abstract for you guys huh?

For me it is, I'm sorry.

 

[kman_69]

^^no worries man....just trying new stuff... im sick of reading/writing the same love poems about the same situations...in the same format

 

[M4cKaVe71]

roftlmaowtflol??¡!?¿
am I disappointed?? yes, I am! :\
I think Im gonna read it again lol just kiddin..

pretty smart, simple and very very very original! :0

 

[kman_69]

^^lol errrr thanks man, i think

thanks for peepin....

peace.

 

[~live2tell~]

It's different in an interesting kind of way, but it doesn't really fdo anything for me... maybe if you'd filled the middle section with what you wanted to say, and then ended it how you did I would have liked it better. Its cool to try new things though