The Bridge of Opposites

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i'll reply to the poems ASAP, i'll understand if you close this, i just wanted to post it.

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Her and I, sitting alone on the dock.
The doorway to my heart was not open, she knocked.
I stare down and watch as water meets my eye.
Looking in an opposite direction i can still see the sky.
As moonlight hits the ocean, a reflection occurs.
One of white light on liquid, mixed with a reflection of her.
Sitting beside me, oblivious to all of my thoughts.
I'm unaware if she sees what i see in the water or not.
Subconsciously i realize a symbolic occurance.
My eyes drift like the water and they follow the currents.
I glance to my left, see our hands interlocked.
Sitting on the lake yet connected to land by the dock.
It's very similar;
A created structure that unites two different forces.
Unnatural at first, so it must be built to support this.
Earth and Water, natural opposites as life debuted.
Male and Female, both take a choice to combine the two.
Our hands are a symbol of choice, a symbol of one.
The moon is a symbol of time, soon it will switch to the sun.
And the water i stare at that is reflecting its light
Shows that all forces work together for the connection tonight
As the tide hits the dock i hear a voice: immunity.
Which will remain as long as we hold on to this choice of unity.
 

The.Menace

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Man, the last time you said you're gonna do your replies and YOU DIDN'T, I left the poem open because I know u did a lot for the board, but I ain't going 2 accept that a second time, that would be unfair. Closed. Sorry.
 
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