The Truth

[Rahim]

The Truth

Truth has everyone excited
But from me, they try to hide it
Past is no where near the future
and Present is no where near Tomorrow
Today seems empty as it is
It's kind of hard to explain
But atleast the truth still remains

by Rahim

 

[The.Menace]

closed

by Menace

 

[The.Menace]

....

 

[Rahim]

Thanks man

 

[kman_69]

Past is no where near the future
and Present is no where near Tomorrow
Today seems empty as it is

^^nice lines here...really got me thinking....you should expand on this!

anyways, i dont think i've seen u post in here before?...so nice drop!...keep it up!

peace.

 

[Kadafi Son]

I'll be real, I wasn't too much into it cuz it was hard too understand at some parts. I caught on to tha last lines and I was feelin' them, so do some more so I can some more of what u got. Alright?

Peace...

 

[Helena]

i liked this

 

[tHuG $TyLe]

Truth has everyone excited
But from me, they try to hide it
^That was a cool opener, kinda relate to it also

Past is no where near the future
and Present is no where near Tomorrow
^
I liked these lines the best.

In conclusion it was kinda short, i like reading things a little longer.
But it was cool.

 

[~live2tell~]

The Truth

Truth has everyone excited
But from me, they try to hide it
Past is no where near the future
and Present is no where near Tomorrow
Today seems empty as it is
It's kind of hard to explain
But atleast the truth still remains

by Rahim

Although this is short it said alot, I really like it and highlighted my fave part, interested in reading more from you

 

[XIAN]

Time is strange isn't it? For some reason there's more to this poem, good one,
~peace~