too late

[shattered dreams]

heart is ripped out my chest
love obviously got the best
now its time for me to lay to rest
life it was a very difficult test
which i did not pass, with success
now nothings left in this life
its time for to accept the end in stride
i guess an end comes to every ride
never thought a ride would break my pride
how did i let it escalate to this
time to finally accept deaths kiss
im sorry to the people who will miss
but remember the happiness
and chew on it while you remenisce
of the things i left behind
the personality you knew to be mine
but now i guess its really time
to put end to all this pain
no more of this bullshit game
of life, it drove me insane
but my depression and rage can not be tamed
as i enter into the gates of my new home
just remember, you will never be alone
keep the strength that you all have grown
and keep it as solid as stone
please do not make the same mistakes
of living your life also filled with hidden hate
realize that life is precious its all so great
know that an any sadness you can escape
i just wish it wasnt to late
for me to be able to finally see
what i had just said
but its too late a few minutes ill be dead
i can already feel the fire rushing through my head
taking pills nah, i should of just walked instead
but its too late as my heart fails, i lay down on the bed
my face is turning a crimson red
im sorry this is something that i regret
please i love you all never let that be something you never forg...

 

[The.Menace]

remembers me a lot of me, myself and my poetry. I like it.

 

[kman_69]

rhyme scheme comes across as a little forced...

but still a cool peice...im feelin it

keep it up

peace.

 

[~live2tell~]

Very powerful and moving piece of writing, sorry you had to write, but its one of the best poems I've seen from you. You kept me interested throughout as your choice of words was good and varied and your rhymes were great.

 

[shattered dreams]

thanks for all your responses much appreciated