Under revision.

[Jurhum]

Some stuff I'm righting as we speak. Just need some thoughts. I saw this forum was dead, so i thought i'd contribute.

Without prior notification, I got deployed to war
stranded in this battlefield, I can't take no more
Can't figure out my surroundings, what am I fighting for
they got me fighting their battles, am even enjoyin it
will I maintain my sanity, or am i forever losin it
hand over my night vision, i've mad a pact with the devil
time to initiate my mission, this city is meant to be leveled
assasins against assasins, they got the streets uprising
on our turf they tresspassin, won't leave them to see the horizon
everyone is a target, won't abide by the rules of engagement
shoot em and loot em then wait, the 30th i should get my payement
mercenaries have been sworn in, their objective is to kill
a soldier mourned in the mornin, leaving behind only his will

 

[CalcuoCuchicheo]

Has this progressed any further?

It's already decent but I'd really like to see it in it's final form.

 

[Jurhum]

Thnx for your reply.. but I didn't finish it seeing i really suck in rapping. However, I wrote a so called poem and posted it in PJ here is a link... check it out and tell me what you think.

Here is the link...

http://2pacboard.com/forum/thread130137.html

 

[CalcuoCuchicheo]

It's done my man.

Maybe you could check out my drop in this section.

 

[Emma]

I like it. I'll be sure to reply to the rest in PJ later.

 

[ImmortalTech]

i liked it man, its good to see mc's stray a lil away from the battle raps, and ill punchlines, and drop something like that, u need to finish that off and repost for sure

~peace

 

[WayCide-Ridah]

were's the finished one!?! naw but ill, i'll check out the other one in a bit