Untitled from MATW95

[MATW95]

Untitled 3rd Drop from MATW95

As you can tell, I don't title my shit because I'm bad with that kinda stuff, so for future reference, if you've got an idea for a title, just drop it by. Thanks, and here's a drop:


Yo I went to the label I've been shopping my demo to
They said "You need ice for people to be down with you"
I said "Aight but what about the songs my man?"
They told me they'd deal with that when the time came, damn
So now I'm spending less time writing and more at the mall
And when I start writing, cell rings, cuz I'm expecting a call
From a guy in the clique they hired to hit the clubs with me
Roll on dubs with me, hit buds with me, but I'm not a thug you see
I'm a cat with a mind whose thinking hasn't been impaired
So everytime I recite my rhymes their faces say they're scared
And I tell them not to label me conscious, but the truth
Because the thug gimmick is rotten like Skittles on a kid's tooth
But they say it balances out with Common and Kweli,
Kanye and Mos, but I interjected and said "C'MON G
Akir, Tech, and I are stuck in the underground
Give us some light and we'll expose the real Hip Hop sound"
But they kicked me out the building and said "Never come back!"
I guess my vision's a dream and like Hov, it'll Fade 2 Black


This one isn't as personal as the first two drops I've got on here, but hey, a writer's gotta be diverse right?

 

[The.Menace]

lol, I dunno, I had to laugh when I read this, this is like a lil funny hiphop story. It's all good, poetry doesn't always have to be serious.

 

[MATW95]

Lol, that's good, that was the point. I was trying to put a comical view on what really happens in the industry.

 

[kman_69]

this was great man!...i really liked it, would translate well into a song...

But they say it balances out with Common and Kweli,
Kanye and Mos, but I interjected and said "C'MON G

^^that line was awesome

you only 14??...thats pretty fuckin good!

 

[MATW95]

Thanks for the feedback kman, glad you appreciated it.

 

[~live2tell~]

Untitled 3rd Drop from MATW95

As you can tell, I don't title my shit because I'm bad with that kinda stuff, so for future reference, if you've got an idea for a title, just drop it by. Thanks, and here's a drop:


Yo I went to the label I've been shopping my demo to
They said "You need ice for people to be down with you"
I said "Aight but what about the songs my man?"
They told me they'd deal with that when the time came, damn
So now I'm spending less time writing and more at the mall
And when I start writing, cell rings, cuz I'm expecting a call
From a guy in the clique they hired to hit the clubs with me
Roll on dubs with me, hit buds with me, but I'm not a thug you see
I'm a cat with a mind whose thinking hasn't been impaired
So everytime I recite my rhymes their faces say they're scared
And I tell them not to label me conscious, but the truth
Because the thug gimmick is rotten like Skittles on a kid's tooth
But they say it balances out with Common and Kweli,
Kanye and Mos, but I interjected and said "C'MON G
Akir, Tech, and I are stuck in the underground
Give us some light and we'll expose the real Hip Hop sound"
But they kicked me out the building and said "Never come back!"
I guess my vision's a dream and like Hov, it'll Fade 2 Black


This one isn't as personal as the first two drops I've got on here, but hey, a writer's gotta be diverse right?

Another good piece, and diverse you are! Liked the story made me smile, good flow again, keep it up!