i wrote this diss because i what i heard...i heard on the radio not to long ago that The Game came to D.C. and started talking shit about it and the people in it....the people of D.C were outrage and i reacted the same way for the simple fact that im originally from Washington D.C. even though i live in Suitland, Maryland right now that D.C. pride will always be in my heart...so a bunch of local rap acts from D.C. started recording diss songs towards him and the radio station WPGC 95.5 was playing these songs on the air so that's when me and my some of my boys got together and wrote our own shit....we're getting ready to record it sometime this week hoping to get it played on the radio so here's my verse....
"We Ain't Playin GAMEs" (Diss to GAME)
- Thread starter bigCASH
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Just cuz u Game don't mean we're PLAYIN/ (uh huh!)
we've been doin everything ya faggit ass SAYIN/ (yeah!)
Compton niggaz r pussies yeah u DRE AND YA MANZ// (what!)
and ya'll had 2 jump Zulu cuz he GAVE U DA HANDZ// (pussies!)
don't step foot in da city nigga u ain't WELCOME/ (never!)
cuz niggaz'll put sumthin hot in ya toy souljaz and MELT EM/ (ha ha!)
LA gangs r organized...in D.C. we're RECKLESS// (true!)
talkin bad bout da murda capital u must have a DEATH WISH// (u wanna die nigga!)
1 in ya heart in LA didn't do it so in D.C. u'll get 1 in ya NAWGIN/ (blaow!)
cuz D.C. niggaz r known 4 killin and ROBBIN/
stealin and dealin hustlin and GO GO CLUBZ//
like Ja said we SHOW NO LUV to ya'll HOMO THUGZ// (faggit!)
after da head shot u still gonna take FO' MO' SLUGZ// (brrrrat!)
it ain't sumthin 2 be proud of but we KILL MORE/
come back 2 town u'll get dealt wit and end up like BILLBOARD/ (whooo!)
da front page reads another rapper slain cuz he TALKED SHIT//
and ya faggit ass stay ridin Easy and PAC'S DICK// (get ya own style nigga!)
it's all about u we ain't gonna make this EAST AND WEST/
we're gonna finish what u started we don't put our BEFF'S 2 REST/ (mutha fucka!)
we've been doin everything ya faggit ass SAYIN/ (yeah!)
Compton niggaz r pussies yeah u DRE AND YA MANZ// (what!)
and ya'll had 2 jump Zulu cuz he GAVE U DA HANDZ// (pussies!)
don't step foot in da city nigga u ain't WELCOME/ (never!)
cuz niggaz'll put sumthin hot in ya toy souljaz and MELT EM/ (ha ha!)
LA gangs r organized...in D.C. we're RECKLESS// (true!)
talkin bad bout da murda capital u must have a DEATH WISH// (u wanna die nigga!)
1 in ya heart in LA didn't do it so in D.C. u'll get 1 in ya NAWGIN/ (blaow!)
cuz D.C. niggaz r known 4 killin and ROBBIN/
stealin and dealin hustlin and GO GO CLUBZ//
like Ja said we SHOW NO LUV to ya'll HOMO THUGZ// (faggit!)
after da head shot u still gonna take FO' MO' SLUGZ// (brrrrat!)
it ain't sumthin 2 be proud of but we KILL MORE/
come back 2 town u'll get dealt wit and end up like BILLBOARD/ (whooo!)
da front page reads another rapper slain cuz he TALKED SHIT//
and ya faggit ass stay ridin Easy and PAC'S DICK// (get ya own style nigga!)
it's all about u we ain't gonna make this EAST AND WEST/
we're gonna finish what u started we don't put our BEFF'S 2 REST/ (mutha fucka!)
How many people wrote this...??
19 bars doesn't tend to sit well - get even numbers if recording.
It was alright but, like most disses to major artists, it is a bit lame.
Do you really do any of this shit? I doubt it (no hate).
Didn't DMX say that line? The "show no love to homo thugs"?
You haven't recorded it but the ad-libs are already in place? I use the term "ad-libs" loosely.
Is the use of caps lock supposed to indicate shouting? If so, try to limit it to syllables otherwise it starts to sound a bit gay.
Other than that, the rhyming was pretty decent - although simple - & the disses were so-so.
19 bars doesn't tend to sit well - get even numbers if recording.
It was alright but, like most disses to major artists, it is a bit lame.
Do you really do any of this shit? I doubt it (no hate).
Didn't DMX say that line? The "show no love to homo thugs"?
You haven't recorded it but the ad-libs are already in place? I use the term "ad-libs" loosely.
Is the use of caps lock supposed to indicate shouting? If so, try to limit it to syllables otherwise it starts to sound a bit gay.
Other than that, the rhyming was pretty decent - although simple - & the disses were so-so.
first of all thanks for atleast checking it out......and you're right it was lame to post it here....cause posting it here isn't doing anything for me...but if me and my boys get it played on the radio that could launch our career's....and about the "homo thugz" line Ja Rule said it...hence the "like Ja said" and yeah i write in my ad libs right after i write my verse so that i can get my whole recording session done on one take...it helps going in very prepared...you know cause they charge by the hour...and the caps are not suppose to indicate shouting but when it's on wax the rhymes are a bit louder then all the other lyrics because after you record your verse you're suppose to go back and spit just your rhymes so when it's played back it sounds like there's two people saying your rhymes....and as far as the disses...you're right they aren't as good as they can be but i can't get personal cause i don't know shit about the man....you know....i'm going to take out the "show no luv to homo thugz" line before i record it.........just reading it in text on a computer screen it's going to look wack....but once we record it and you're able to listnen to it i'm pretty sure your opinion about will change cause...not to sound cocky but my flow is real nice....btw i sincerly wrote this shit in 7 mins...it's nothing serious just a quick little jab at somebody who offended the state i love and the people who live in it.....thanks again for checking it out though
Dis was alright, just weird seein no names, no offense, dissin people. See it all the time on thet net, but hey you got a reason. The flow is good just cus it's so simple, lyrically it is pretty weak, some good lines like,
LA gangs r organized...in D.C. we're RECKLESS// (true!)
talkin bad bout da murda capital u must have a DEATH WISH
thats all that caught my attention.
we're gonna finish what u started we don't put our BEFF'S 2 REST
Depending on how you look at it that can make no sense. Depends on how you see putting a beef to rest, either by ending it ("finish" it), or calling a truce and what not, might get some criticsm there, doubt it though.
LA gangs r organized...in D.C. we're RECKLESS// (true!)
talkin bad bout da murda capital u must have a DEATH WISH
thats all that caught my attention.
we're gonna finish what u started we don't put our BEFF'S 2 REST
Depending on how you look at it that can make no sense. Depends on how you see putting a beef to rest, either by ending it ("finish" it), or calling a truce and what not, might get some criticsm there, doubt it though.
i understand what you meant but some might look at it the other way, i always try to find ways to criticize cus their is no way someone can get better if people are always like, wow good job keep it up, so i guess it's good that that is all i could really find. Plus the simplicity of it but, no big deal. Peace.
i liked this, simple, but i liked the la gangs are organized line, when u get audio done i'd like to hear it, on multis, wordplay, vocab i feel i have no say cuz i'm not a real good critic and i don't use alot of the stuff myself, keep it simple, str8 to the point, if you got some ill metaphors use them.
big cash
u notin but a big dumb ass
wit yo dumb raps
hiphop is bout battlin but he aint battlin back
so what the fuck u battlin at
step back holmes and take a breather
and its not like im feelin da boy neither
but i spit in a haters face so just hold no grudge
b4 i show this whoLe board whos da homo thug
compton niggaz are pussys? what are u crazy
ur mom shited out a log and thought it was a baby
now i know there MUSt be SOME killaz in DC
but U AINT ONE HOMMIE stop tryin to be me
im organized and reckless
i come threw DC snatch ya neckless and leave ya NECK less
Uve just been owned
u notin but a big dumb ass
wit yo dumb raps
hiphop is bout battlin but he aint battlin back
so what the fuck u battlin at
step back holmes and take a breather
and its not like im feelin da boy neither
but i spit in a haters face so just hold no grudge
b4 i show this whoLe board whos da homo thug
compton niggaz are pussys? what are u crazy
ur mom shited out a log and thought it was a baby
now i know there MUSt be SOME killaz in DC
but U AINT ONE HOMMIE stop tryin to be me
im organized and reckless
i come threw DC snatch ya neckless and leave ya NECK less
Uve just been owned