What you think, I appreciate hate.

ARon

Well-Known Member
#1
Replied too: Immortal Tech - Untitled
Big Cash - We aint playin Games



Kind of a braggin track, no real meaning, just venting some shit.

The game is full of nothing all you rappers is dead to me
god bless deceased emcees but there still liver than youll ever be
always rappin bout money, cars and 18 room mansions
but those who show you respect cant even fill up your phantom
actin like you blastin but that shit is made up coward
cus in order for you to shoot you need makeup and powder
you dont hold power your every thought i just devour
you hopes your dreams i take em and make em shatter
select stylz you cowards you just aint ready
the crew come through and stomp into the game with a machette
leveling this tropical forest of rhymes that just bore us
its obvious you cant take it so put the weight on my shoulders
a mic controller whos ability is hostile
i bring inevitability to the impossible
and i aint stoppin til hip hop is back on top so
move out the way cus i get stronger with every claimed soul

I appreciate hate, if you don't like it tell me why, Peace.
 
#2
always rappin bout money, cars and 18 room mansions
but those who show you respect cant even fill up your phantom

Some Nice Punch Lines.. i lied that one in particular, cuz it was like a shot at the industry as a whole. Good flow over all.

actin like you blastin but that shit is made up coward
cus in order for you to shoot you need makeup and powder
you dont hold power your every thought i just devour
^^funny, cuz i used these same 3 rhyming words one time when i was rhyming bout 9/11 a long time ago (I am in no way saying u bit the idea off me)


wasnt really feeling the last to lines how u rhymed SOUL, and SO... but maybe that was intended

... but in all nice job
~keep spittin, peace
 
#4
like ImmortalTech said i like the third and the fourth line the best cause it's so true...a lot of these rappers these days have so many people with them all the time but more than half of them are just there along for the ride not many of them truly respect that artist....but all in all pretty good piece
 
#5
I thought it was tight. It had a nice flow to it, though (to me) it was off at a couple of points. I liked the punchlines that you used, too. The best one to me was: "god bless deceased emcees but there still liver than youll ever be". Out of a 10, I'd give it a solid 8. Could've been better, but the flow knocked you off
 

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