Word Play

[kman_69]

ok, this one took me a while to write...so i thought i better share it!...its essentially a story of a mans life told backwards...until the point where he realises he has been talking about himself the whole time through his "word play"...anyway, read it...you'll get the idea...

Word Play - 19 December 2005

so DEAD, hes deadLY!, left as dead as the dead Sea..
-scrolls be.. seen scrolled up so gently..
..yet mentally his mentality is meant to be gathering
his mean state of reality, is it really his reality?
..or is it just unreal?...man, it just has to be!
..& its sad to see him glad to be gradually graduating
from a universal university, thats universally known..
-for being different ..ah whats the difference?..
..maybe he should defer -referring to the differences
..that aren't listed, but still they make sense..
in the sense of being paid for in cents & honor..
..& the horror of not having dollars to pay for it
-its often offered in the off-sense of "worth"
he's not worthy? ..man, its all just words!..
-but i guess for what its worth he's adverse to it..
writing verses, and versing himself, before he Vs
himself.. in itself is oneself; WAIT, thats me!
waiting to be waited on in different ways, i see..
-"hes" using Word Play as an escape from things!

 

[_carmi]

u got me lost in all that wordplay lol

 

[Illuminattile]

Needs less "...man,"

 

[XIAN]

That's creative. I like how it flows like a rap verse. It's like he started trying to get money, then he's in school, and then he dies suddenly, while he maybe was a poet the whole time.

~peace~

 

[True Thugz]

Fuck! I'm lost to the dayz. Haha. Creative indeed. Guess someone in here would find this great coz they can understand the piece.
I liked it I guess

u got me lost in all that wordplay lol

Haha :thumb:

 

[kman_69]

u got me lost in all that wordplay lol

lol ah well, thanks for peepin man!

 

[kman_69]

Needs less "...man,"

hehe really?..theres only 2...and they both fit really?

ah well, any other comments?

thanks for peepin neways!

 

[kman_69]

That's creative. I like how it flows like a rap verse. It's like he started trying to get money, then he's in school, and then he dies suddenly, while he maybe was a poet the whole time.

~peace~

pretty much got it in one man hehe nice work....glad u feelin the flow on it too!

thanks for peepin man!

peace.

 

[kman_69]

Fuck! I'm lost to the dayz. Haha. Creative indeed. Guess someone in here would find this great coz they can understand the piece.
I liked it I guess

lol, you love it!

xian seemed to understand it pretty well....im sure u did too

peace.

 

[keco52]

..yet mentally his mentality is meant to be gathering
his mean state of reality, is it really his reality?

I like those lines...nice job

 

[kman_69]

^^hehe thanks!....glad u feelin em.

 

[The.Menace]

Yeah this is how I imagined a poem called 'wordplay' - a funny lil piece, but not too deep - on the other hand, has every poem 2 be deep? I don't think so.....

pz

 

[kman_69]

hehe thanks menace, yeah not too deep...but its still got some deepness to it i think, like it tells a story....which is kinda hard to do when your mindset is on doing a word play peice..

thanks for peepin!

peace.

 

[Ivory$horty]

Woah. That was a really dope piece. I haven't dropped by in a long time but I'm glad I peeped this when I did.
Very creative indeed and I LOVED the way you worded this. Just brilliant.

 

[kman_69]

hey, thanks Francis....glad u feelin this one ...havn't seen u in here for ages!.... how u been?

 

[Ivory$horty]

Yea, I know it's been awhile. Life caught up with me. I've been alright..how's you?

 

[kman_69]

hehe i know watchu mean...yeah im still writing away like a maniac ...you should drop in here more!...i miss reading ur stuff!

 

[~live2tell~]

Cleverly written, I enjoyed the read and loved your word choice - nice drop Kman

 

[kman_69]

ah thanks live, glad u feelin this one!....thanks for peepin!


peace.

 

[kimbo_thug]

i notice with all ur poems theres a lot of thoguht goes into them
i think i liked it dunno got a bit confused lol xx