You're Free

[MX Red]

Not my best one, but it means a lot.



Its been like this for to long,
I know your every thought; I can predict your every move,
There is nothing left between me and you, its all been used.
Lets call it quits; can we just leave it at this?
When we are apart it’s me I miss,
Being us is killing me,
I just want to be free,
Free from the restrictions of love,
Free do not give a fuck,
Guilt free to worry about how I feel…
without the emotional bribery of monogamy,
I want to be answerable to myself,
Not to you, or to love,
So please just let me be,
You’re not my problem,
We are not what we used to be,
You’re free…
No longer a part of me.


-MX

 

[Kadafi Son]

Dang...true as fuck. I felt your emotion in this piece.

{Being us, is killing me}

I really liked your use of words in here. I'd label that a best work for you. Keep em coming.

 

[kman_69]

that was tight man....

i feel wat u sayin on this one....i definetly been there...

 

[Swollen_Member]

I'm feeling this one.

 

[Sebastian]

definitely a nice drop...even though its sad to hear what you are going through

 

[S O F I]

Well, if poetry helps you relieve the pain, then props.

 

[~live2tell~]

Not my best one, but it means a lot.



Its been like this for to long,
I know your every thought; I can predict your every move,
There is nothing left between me and you, its all been used.
Lets call it quits; can we just leave it at this?
When we are apart it’s me I miss,
Being us is killing me,
I just want to be free,
Free from the restrictions of love,
Free do not give a fuck,
Guilt free to worry about how I feel…
without the emotional bribery of monogamy,
I want to be answerable to myself,
Not to you, or to love,
So please just let me be,
You’re not my problem,
We are not what we used to be,
You’re free…
No longer a part of me.


-MX

Wow feeling this alot, almost as if you are speaking to me hehe. Great expression and emotion flows through the words you put down here, gotta admire that. Keep writing, I hope your situation gets better, either way smile some

 

[The.Menace]

Sometimes you rhyme sometimes you don't - I don't like that, sorry.