My Life Doesn't Make Sense

#1
***Alright some of you know me and those of you who do might notice this piece is my style. Those who don't know me my style is a little hard to follow. I don't pre-write anything. I just write it and then thats it. Sometimes it works out great and sometimes it doesn't but thats what make my style so different. Hope y'all enjoy

My Life Doesn't make Sense
Written 10/20/2007 at 5:37pm

My life is kinda like a manuscript
If I offered you a han' you'd skip
Life's full of trials and tribulations
Lots of denials and sexual relations
Where do I start? What should be my part?
It tears me apart Do I have a heart?

Used to have endless inspiration now with what I'm facin
My Life's like a game on fuckin’ Playstation
No controls but my buttons are always being pushed
Tried to hold my breath but my lungs are cushed.

Display my mental through a pencil
My exterior is as flimsy as tensil
Some want to know about my emotion
but that’s got more waves then the ocean
Its funny cuz if I didn't know it
I would think I wasn't Tha Thug Poet

I've been through more shit than you can relate to
If you hear me say something about u it's not because I hate you
I've got a fate too an expiration date? I got that too
I even know that these expressions have escaped you.

See my life had an alpha and its had an omega
Flows kinda choppy and sloppy but bear with me I beg ya
When I was born my heart was torn insignificant like a piece of corn
15 years later I was scorn, heart was reborn, my head was horned
Went from a seed to the Devil indeed
Last one left Like poets are a dying breed
The lyrics that I recite I didn’t write
Is it right? 2night, I'll tell you about my sight
See I see things differently maybe more simply
It's beautiful as if I was conducting a symphony
If you were to look at me I'm the one pulling the strings uninterrupted
Easy to see my hearts corrupted probably couldn't tell since it erupted.

I’m dead inside just along for the ride
Swallowed my pride just roll with the tide
All that aside I still remember when I died
No one cried but a shot at a legacy? I tried

My inspiration was killed for profit I couldn't stop it
I thought I was a street niggah kinda like a ghetto prophet
Got two kids make me a proud dad and I'm happy for it
I adore it my goal? Homie I already scored it.

Most people are wondering why this skips around from place to place
guess you would understand more if I explained it face to face
My life’s a little combination of so many
It makes perfect sense with a chaser and some Henny
Life’s not predictable it changes gears like a faulty transmission
Always leaves you wishin’ that you knew what was the mission
Mine is complex yet it’s kind of simple too
My life doesn’t make sense to me does it make sense to you?
 
#5
Hay I really like this, Its been a while since i even read ur work but its still dope as fuk. feelin this piece ttp.



My life is kinda like a manuscript
If I offered you a han' you'd skip
Life's full of trials and tribulations
Lots of denials and sexual relations
Where do I start? What should be my part?
It tears me apart Do I have a heart?

^^ i like tha way u opened this piece. u said so much in just a few short lines.. I felt it.


Display my mental through a pencil
My exterior is as flimsy as tensil
Some want to know about my emotion
but that’s got more waves then the ocean

^^That right there is niiiccccee.. I like how u put that down also.


Went from a seed to the Devil indeed
Last one left Like poets are a dying breed
The lyrics that I recite I didn’t write
Is it right? 2night, I'll tell you about my sight
See I see things differently maybe more simply
It's beautiful as if I was conducting a symphony
If you were to look at me I'm the one pulling the strings uninterrupted
Easy to see my hearts corrupted probably couldn't tell since it erupted.

^^ straight poetry. i love it.

I really enjoyed readin this piece from ya. I liked tha feeling of mixd emotion & i felt ur flo.. ur vocab was tight aswel. Its good 2 C peeps from tha old days still doin wat thay do. Keep it up. :)

peace
 

The.Menace

Well-Known Member
Staff member
#6
Hey TPP, sorry it toolk me so long to reply, been busy.....but you knew I would sooner or later, right?

Boy, this is really some good stuff, I really love it. I know you said no one can relate but well I can. I can't understand 100% of your life whatever, but I feel this piece and can relate to a lot of things you said in there. One of my thoughts goin through this poem was...damn, we gotta meet and talk. After all these years you might still be the one poet in here that I can feel the most. Pz.

My fav part is....

Used to have endless inspiration now with what I'm facin
My Life's like a game on fuckin’ Playstation
No controls but my buttons are always being pushed
Tried to hold my breath but my lungs are cushed.
uuha, that's nice.
 

Kadafi Son

Well-Known Member
#8
Damn, u get propz for this. I feel like I'm readin' my own poems. Nice rhymes, tight structure, tight everythang. I'm definately feelin' u 100% on this too, man. 4 real
 
#9
thanks to everyone. yeah menace I know what ur sayin homie. Shits just hectic as fuck. Im on that poem a day shit. I'll be dropping more shit soon. Just gotta get my inspiration on. Seems to be alot of that going on at the moment so its good for me... Well lyrically its good for me....
 

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