this is about a re-occurring dream ive been having for a lil while...feedback would be nice.
Therapeutic Dream -7 May 2005
i havn't gotta doctor to tell me what my thoughts mean
-but i do have the ability to write em as i see em'..
..like this dream that i've been havin recently
it seems to be different to any i've had previously
-see, i start off naked -sinking in some water
its all dark, and my body is barely supported
of course i can't breathe, but i dont feel that nervous
..coz i see someone i know -just up a little further
it seems absurd i know, but she's naked as well..
and as she swims down to me, i feel my heart swell
i mean as far as i can tell, she knows whats going on
-she kisses me on the lips, and air fills up my lungs
i come undone as we start to float to the surface
with her legs wrapped around me -i think im inserted..
i cant be sure of it, but i realise were at sea..
-we start making love as we wash over to the beach
..i never wanna leave -it just feels so beautiful
-she licks my ear and does things that she used to do
whatever my view, things just seem so right..
-being inside, as i see a tear form in her eye
its not a surprise, coz i really feel the same way, plus
-what we have in that moment, is something very sacred..
but before i wake up, she says something that amazes me
-"i love you, and some day.. i want to have ur baby."
Therapeutic Dream -7 May 2005
i havn't gotta doctor to tell me what my thoughts mean
-but i do have the ability to write em as i see em'..
..like this dream that i've been havin recently
it seems to be different to any i've had previously
-see, i start off naked -sinking in some water
its all dark, and my body is barely supported
of course i can't breathe, but i dont feel that nervous
..coz i see someone i know -just up a little further
it seems absurd i know, but she's naked as well..
and as she swims down to me, i feel my heart swell
i mean as far as i can tell, she knows whats going on
-she kisses me on the lips, and air fills up my lungs
i come undone as we start to float to the surface
with her legs wrapped around me -i think im inserted..
i cant be sure of it, but i realise were at sea..
-we start making love as we wash over to the beach
..i never wanna leave -it just feels so beautiful
-she licks my ear and does things that she used to do
whatever my view, things just seem so right..
-being inside, as i see a tear form in her eye
its not a surprise, coz i really feel the same way, plus
-what we have in that moment, is something very sacred..
but before i wake up, she says something that amazes me
-"i love you, and some day.. i want to have ur baby."
...thanks for the positive feedback!
