Nah, its the fact that you told me mine lacks word play, and it seemed I was ryming with anything. You should check yours again, because you were ryming with anything that fits, simple shit like, "you, too, how, now"...You understand? I'm not judging your abilities as a poet, i'm just telling you how it is, because you rymed with more simple words than mine! Good luck with your success as a poet, but i'm juudging on the ABILITY of that poem, just like you judged the ability on my poem, which there wasn't much emotion in either, in my opinion, and i'll admit that on my poem too. But my poem was written when I was about 16 years old, I have changed since then, as a poet, and my ability and education in writing poetry has improved. Like I said, good luck in your success as a poet. :thumb:
With You
- Thread starter Ivory$horty
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I don't think you could ever really understand how much I appreciate this Frances. You got such talent (you know it, don't let anyone make you think differently) and when you involve me in that...in something like this...I could write all night and not really tell you exactly how much I appreciate it. I loved the poem, Its something I'll cherish. And no doubt something I feel more than anyone else could. Your words spoke for themselves, as a poem that stands alone as a great piece, so much emotion and feeling. But personally, its more than just a poem and it touched me, more than you or anyone else could ever know. Te quiero, I hope this means something to you..
Papa J (
) You know I thought I had it mapped out in my head what I was gonna say to you but all that just went down the drain now, lol. I appreciate you and what you had to say in response to this poem and I'm more than glad that you loved and appreciated this as much as you did. You know your words mean the most to me and always leave me with a smile, there's no doubt about that at all. S'agapo papi....Thank you for being you. Thank you for responding.
3 hugz,2 kisses,1 love
~*Ivory$horty*~
) You know I thought I had it mapped out in my head what I was gonna say to you but all that just went down the drain now, lol. I appreciate you and what you had to say in response to this poem and I'm more than glad that you loved and appreciated this as much as you did. You know your words mean the most to me and always leave me with a smile, there's no doubt about that at all. S'agapo papi....Thank you for being you. Thank you for responding. 3 hugz,2 kisses,1 love
~*Ivory$horty*~
Belo said:
3 words? oh yea... I saw the movie "suck, my, cock"
hehe.. sorry couldn't resist.. it's from Tomcats if you didn't know
hehe.. sorry couldn't resist.. it's from Tomcats if you didn't know
beautiful poem though ivory :thumb: :thumb: could feel the love in every line...
man it's been so long since i've been in here that i ALMOST forgot how good you are.
poiima su einai pouli omorphey... <<< hope i said that right... lol
Lata